Cameo time! Rowdy, Mo DiFalco, Enzo, and smokey make cameo's in this chapter. further two of the B-team members Maciej and Linda are solving this case solo, to find Jessie (from info from Saddy and Eyrton, as well as Burt).

It was Trey not smokey

Awesome!

Great story! looking forward for the Episode 2.

A cute story. I honestly chuckled at a few parts (like Trey's afro being set on fire and the "just look at the pretty pictures" comment). I'm interested how Eyrton is so sure it's Enzo that kidnapped her. Is he right? Is it just a guess out of pure jealousy or resentment? Are Jesse and Enzo secretly dating and wanted to run off for some privacy? Or not, will there be some kind of romantic tension between the two in the futre?

My only constructive crit is the artist could work a little on doing female bodies (the anatomy is a little off at times). Don't get me wrong, anatomy isn't always easy.

I want more great storys that urban rivals have

Maybe Enzo and Jessie are on a date

just saying, it could happen

I wouldn't be surprised, especally if Eyrton is also in love with her.

I have my own suspcion... notice the running gag about the stairs? how much you want to bet Jessie just got stuck in the elevator?