40enMon, 17 Jul 2006 18:39:52 GMTMon, 17 Jul 2006 18:39:52 GMTMon, 17 Jul 2006 17:47:40 GMTMon, 17 Jul 2006 17:26:32 GMT
Ielena- 'Last born of an old an powerfull vampires family' would be better as 'Last child born to an old and powerful vampire family'
and 'she left the familly castle' should be 'she left the family castle'

Elixir - 'she loves to break in the classiest of the Uppers' parties and to turn it into wild orgies.' should be 'she loves to break into the classiest of the Uppers' parties and to turn them into wild orgies.'

Cell - 'Cell spend his entire life in the Clint City sewer system. His existence would have remained secret if he hadn't get out one day,' should be 'Cell spent his entire life in the Clint City sewer system. His existence would have remained secret if he hadn't got out one day,'

Endora seems fine.]]>Mon, 03 Jul 2006 07:35:18 GMT Nymphea 'until the day when the Junta choosed the place to test its new' should be 'until the day when the Junta chose the place to test its new'
The other three seem fine.]]>Thu, 29 Jun 2006 02:36:37 GMT on the market page, the title info should read:
'The Market allows players to buy and sell characters between them. To sell your characters, use the link available below each of your characters in My Collection.
To get more Clintz right now, or to improve your collection with additional packs of characters, just go to The Shop.']]>Wed, 28 Jun 2006 02:17:39 GMTNanook, i'm certain shes a girl
, so it should read...
When Nanook arriveed back at her village from a polar bear hunt, everyone had been drowned %u2013 global warming had melted their igloos while they were asleep! Drunk with grief and rage, Nanook jumped on her snowboard and joined the Ulu Watu to avenge her kinsfolk. The government better watch their step !]]>Wed, 28 Jun 2006 02:01:12 GMTTue, 27 Jun 2006 18:03:01 GMT HAVE FUN !
ps:An english message board is a GREAT idea =) thx !]]>Sat, 24 Jun 2006 16:48:29 GMT 'XXX has leaved the fight'
should be
'left the fight']]>Fri, 23 Jun 2006 16:20:35 GMT 'Unable to send your challenge as your opponent has already been challenged.']]>Thu, 22 Jun 2006 21:56:01 GMTThu, 22 Jun 2006 03:00:32 GMTWed, 21 Jun 2006 20:38:53 GMTWed, 21 Jun 2006 13:47:49 GMT 'You think you build the ultimate Deck ? You believe you got a great idea for a play strategy ?'
should be
'You think you've built the ultimate Deck ? You believe you've got a great idea for a play strategy ?']]>Wed, 21 Jun 2006 01:57:21 GMT 'Others informations' should just be 'Other information',
and '... characters over 146' would probably be better as '... characters out of 146']]>Wed, 21 Jun 2006 01:52:39 GMT At the top it should say 'go to the message boards' instead of messages boards,
At your recent battles bit,
'you made a draw with ...' would read better as
'you drew with ...'
and with the rankings, it says (number)th no matter what number it is. it should read 1st, 2nd or 3rd, and the rest xth. eg... 121st, 1342nd, 2653rd, 166th
Oh, the exception to the rule is 11th, 12th, 13th. Confusing, huh?]]>Mon, 19 Jun 2006 13:55:52 GMTLeo 'Reconverted as a Living Dead hunter' does n't quite make sense. Maybe 'Retrained as a hunter for the Living Dead'. At the moment it seems to suggest that he himself is Living Dead. Unless thats the point!]]>Mon, 19 Jun 2006 10:36:36 GMT Melluzine - 'cruaulty' should be 'cruelty'
Leo - 'Leo find himself' should be ''Leo found himself'
and
Perle - 'the cybernetics implants' is either 'the cybernetic implants' or 'the cybernetics implant'. I would go for the first one.]]>Sun, 18 Jun 2006 06:42:30 GMT]]>Sat, 17 Jun 2006 21:45:50 GMT Belong's does not require an apostrophe,
'If you are an addict to statistics' maybe should be 'If you are addicted to statistics'

You did pick up a few I miised and I have noticed new ones in those as well:

'At the beginning of each fight, 4 characters are randomly select from your deck.'

'At the beginning of each fight, 4 characters are randomly selected from your deck.'

and,

'It's up to you to decide wether you want to fight for a cause or be a mercenary and work as a freelance.'

'It's up to you to decide whether you want to fight for a cause or be a mercenary and work as a freelance.'

Sorry if I came across as a bit arrogant but I just have a thing about the misuse of the English language.]]>