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Improving the english site

Improving the english site
Wednesday 07/06/2006, 05:55
Z Earth - Senior English

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Improving the english site
Z Earth - Senior English - Wednesday 07/06/2006, 05:55

Hello everyone,

As you know, we are french and we may have made a few mistakes in
our translation of the site. If you see anything that seems oddly
written, bad grammar, or wrong tone, can you help us by telling us
how we should modify?

We want the english site to feels as much "natural" for a english (/
american/australian etc..) player as possible..

Thanks!
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TnC-Macthorpe - Imperator - Tea English
Friday 16/06/2006, 16:58

La Junta
Python - general should be General
Otherwise its fine. Although why does Mitch's head come off?!
22/64
TnC-Macthorpe - Imperator - Tea English
Friday 16/06/2006, 17:06

Leaders
Ashigaru - 'He can wait hours for his opponent to do one single false move...' reads better as 'He can wait hours for his opponent to make one false move...'
23/64
TnC-Macthorpe - Imperator - Tea English
Friday 16/06/2006, 17:11

Hmm. The Python one has changed itself! What I was pointing out was that general is spelt with a small g and it should be capitalised thus 'G'.
24/64
TnC-Macthorpe - Imperator - Tea English
Friday 16/06/2006, 17:20

Montana's
Pino - 'The Montanas like him even though think he's a loser,' should be 'The Montanas like him even though they think he's a loser,'
25/64
TnC-Macthorpe - Imperator - Tea English
Friday 16/06/2006, 17:26

Nightmare
In the Nightmare text 'supernaturals' should be 'supernatural'
Dieter - '...take a new direction.' should be '...took a new direction.'
Estalt - 'success with womans' should be 'success with women'
26/64
TnC-Macthorpe - Imperator - Tea English
Friday 16/06/2006, 17:38

Pussycats
Charlie - 'Charlie girlfriends' should be 'Charlie's girlfriends'
Svethlana - 'on the occasion and leaved discretely,' works better as 'at the opportunity and left discretely,'
Only a few clans to do. Another time I think!
27/64
husky1 - Novice English
Friday 16/06/2006, 18:31

After a stupid bet, Wee Lee wake up in a Duck suit lying next to his skateboard,

wake should be woke
28/64
TnC-Macthorpe - Imperator - Tea English
Friday 16/06/2006, 18:32

I got bored so here I am again
Roots
Armand - 'Rejected by its own family' should be 'Rejected by his own family' and 'Armand find a place' should be 'Armand found a place'
Matthew - 'with its band, the windows, mathew' should be 'with his band, 'The Windows', Matthew'
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husky1 - Novice English
Friday 16/06/2006, 18:38

Here are the 142 characters currently available in Urban Rivals. Be familiar with them so you can make good choice when you purchase Packs. New characters appears often.

corrected version:

Here are the 142 characters currently available in Urban Rivals. Be familiar with them so you can make a good choice when you purchase Packs. New characters appear often.
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husky1 - Novice English
Friday 16/06/2006, 18:43

U must be bored lol ive found a couple mistakes uve found a million im gunna look for more now

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