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Improving the english site

Improving the english site
Wednesday 07/06/2006, 05:55
Z Earth - Senior English

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Improving the english site
Z Earth - Senior English - Wednesday 07/06/2006, 05:55

Hello everyone,

As you know, we are french and we may have made a few mistakes in
our translation of the site. If you see anything that seems oddly
written, bad grammar, or wrong tone, can you help us by telling us
how we should modify?

We want the english site to feels as much "natural" for a english (/
american/australian etc..) player as possible..

Thanks!
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TnC-Macthorpe - Imperator - Tea English
Wednesday 07/06/2006, 08:54

You are addict to statistics, you want to maximize your earnings ? This table belong to you... Is the one that occurs to me. Better translation may be

If you are addict to statistics, or you want to maximize your earnings ? These tables are for you.

Also could it be made clear which parts of the table refer to the winner and loser of the battle and have a lvl 5 added to the bottom of the first table.
Oh and Wee Lee is still in French. I'll keep an eye out for others
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Z Earth - Senior English
Wednesday 07/06/2006, 09:10

Thanks MacThorpe!
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TnC-Macthorpe - Imperator - Tea English
Wednesday 07/06/2006, 13:01

My bad... It should be Addicted not addict! Whoops
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TnC-Macthorpe - Imperator - Tea English
Wednesday 07/06/2006, 13:26

A few more I found.

'Here is you Deck.' should be 'your'

'The Clintz jackpot starts at 1000 Clintz and grow after each battle (we multiply the Clintz earn at each battle by 2 and we put them add them to the Jackpot).'
becomes
'The Clintz jackpot starts at 1000 Clintz and grows after each battle (we multiply the Clintz earned in each battle by 2 and we add them to the Jackpot).'

'The first half of the players also gets a free credit
.
Don't worry, after each tournament, you'll receive automatically a summary of your winnings..'
becomes
'The first half of the players also get a free credit
.
Don't worry, after each tournament, you'll automatically recieve a summary of your winnings..'

I've been through all the pages except the characters, clans and pages within the game itself. Maybe someone else will do them but I expect i shall get bored later on and do them as well!!
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Asik - Hero - Moogle Mafia English
Thursday 08/06/2006, 16:16

On the game rules elo page 'It allow for a more strategic gameplay.' should be 'It allows for more strategic gameplay.' i'll let you know if i find anymore
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TnC-Macthorpe - Imperator - Tea English
Friday 09/06/2006, 16:24

Armand's text reads 'seduced by their geneous goals and homemade beer' I am not entirely sure of the word you mean here. It may be 'generous' but then the line doesn't make much sense.
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TnC-Macthorpe - Imperator - Tea English
Friday 09/06/2006, 16:37

Bangers text is 'But the Bangers out to change...' should be 'But the Bangers are out to change...'
Also here it says that Bangers were founded by 'the Venerable Badernpowa' is this supposed to be the same person as the card Bodenpower

Fifty has no text at all.
Meroo 'After and easy getaway' should be 'After an easy getaway'
Thats it for the Bangers
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TnC-Macthorpe - Imperator - Tea English
Friday 09/06/2006, 16:57

Fang Pi Clang
There are several uses of Clan not Clang I assume this is right?
Tatane is in the present tense and past tense may be better so 'they take her to the wrong dojo and put her in the hands of Fang Pi.That's how Tatane has come to be a particularly violent fighter' would become 'they took her to the wrong dojo and put her in the hands of Fang Pi.That's how Tatane came to be a particularly violent fighter'
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TnC-Macthorpe - Imperator - Tea English
Friday 09/06/2006, 17:13

G.H.E.I.S.T
Igniss, 'apeared' should be 'appeared' he is also mispelt Ignis at one point.
Morlha is mispelt Mortha and 'machiavellic' should be 'Machiavellian'
Vryer 'provide' should be 'provided'
Three down, eleven to go!

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