It's a really good start. I dislike any card whose pwr is lower than 7, however that's just my personal preference. I would swap out Lilou for Aleistar, n find a way to use Murray (he's a boss in elo). As for the All-Stars, I like them maybe Randy for Saki but it's ur preference. N Jessie is amazing for elo as well. Keep us posted this guild is very good at helping other players
I posted this on your other thread in the 'General' section. I'll copy it here, as the ELO section seems more appropriate.
It's not great, but I've seen worse out there.
Your All Star half is quite standard except for Harrow Ld. He has his uses against cards like popular cards like Oshitsune, Herman etc. but I'd probably go for Heartnett. Definitely try and get Saki in any All Star half you make when she's not banned.
I think the Sakrohm half is what's lacking in this deck for me. Sol Hona isn't terrible, but isn't quite as good as most 5* by today's standards. Petra and Jautya are both good 4*, and I would always include at least one of them if not both. Murray is probably more reliable than Ngrath (and Uranus is a great alternative when unbanned). Also consider Aleister for a 2*.
Optimally, I'd be using Marina, Saki, Randy, Jessie, Petra, Jautya, Murray / Uranus, Aleister.
However under the current player bans, Marina, Heartnett, Randy, Jessie, Petra / Jautya, Murray, Ngrath, Aleister seems like a reasonable alternative for these clans.
I agree w Joe on his card desicions (specially w this week's bans) however, think about using Wakai instead of Ngrath n putting the extra * somewhere else (dependent on ur playing style). Also Juatya is much more effective than Petra for me. If it helps
Marina Saki Jessie Karen/Randy
Petra Jautya Murray/Uranus Aleister. Is the standard decks that people usually come up with. If your having troubles with gap, a change would be Petra for Skrumxxt (The 8 3 Damage + 5 5* Sakhrom card) and Jautya - Ngrath.
Marina Saki Jessie simply have to be used in every single AS half when they're available, their far too good not to be considered.
Murray + Aleister are also really good cards for their star category.
The deck I suggested with Karen/Randy depends on the week. Karen I find is better for me anytime especially when you have cards like Murray, Jautya, Aleister who are all prone to SoA, Karen can really make a difference.