What is wrong with this deck?

offline Alhalish Veteran URBAN MADNESS
Tuesday 07/08/2012, 17:03

11/11

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This looks decent on paper, yet I was having a hard time winning with it.

Any suggestions are welcome.

offline yummy12345 Veteran XiongDang
Wednesday 15/08/2012, 00:53

12/11

I think herman and nellie are weak without their bonus, so i always try to avoid running them in half decks
the new one with montana looks better

Clint City, night.