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Improving the english site

Improving the english site
Wednesday 07/06/2006, 05:55
Z Earth - Senior English

Urban Rivals | Free Online Manga Trading Card Game | TCG | MMO
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Improving the english site
Z Earth - Senior English - Wednesday 07/06/2006, 05:55

Hello everyone,

As you know, we are french and we may have made a few mistakes in
our translation of the site. If you see anything that seems oddly
written, bad grammar, or wrong tone, can you help us by telling us
how we should modify?

We want the english site to feels as much "natural" for a english (/
american/australian etc..) player as possible..

Thanks!
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TnC-Macthorpe - Imperator - Tea English
Friday 16/06/2006, 18:47

Sakrohm
Caciope - 'he became an attraction n himself who ' makes a little more sense as ' he became an attraction that'
Guru - 'prepare his arrival' should be 'prepare for his arrival'
Oryon - 'he is the Temple' should be 'he is in the Temple'
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husky1 - Novice English
Friday 16/06/2006, 18:50

Character's card

When you sign up, you receive your first 8 characters. At each level, a character is defined by it's Power (P) and Damage (D). Some characters also got a special ability when they reach a specific level.

All of theses informations are indicated on the character's card.

corrected version:

Character's card

When you sign up, you receive your first 8 characters. At each level, a character is defined by it's Power (P) and Damage (D). Some characters also get a special ability when they reach a specific level.

All of this information is indicated on the character's card.
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husky1 - Novice English
Friday 16/06/2006, 18:53

The Clans

Each character belong to a specific clan. It's up to you to decide wether you want to fight for a cause or be a mercenary and work as a freelance.


corrected version:


Each character belong's to a specific clan. It's up to you to decide wether you want to fight for a cause or be a mercenary and work as a freelance.
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husky1 - Novice English
Friday 16/06/2006, 18:57

The Fights

At the beginning of each fight, 4 characters are randomly select from your deck. The fight is made of 4 rounds. At each round, you and your opponent will select a character. If your character win the round, he will reduce the life of your opponent by the number of damage (D) indicated on his card.


win should be wins
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husky1 - Novice English
Friday 16/06/2006, 19:00

Another missing letter lol

Daily Tournaments

Each day, we run 2 tournament where you can win Clintz and Credits.

tournament should be tournaments
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TnC-Macthorpe - Imperator - Tea English
Friday 16/06/2006, 19:04

Sentinel
Amy - three not 3
Havoc - 'the Lady of his life.' should be 'lady in' or 'love of' depends what you want!
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husky1 - Novice English
Friday 16/06/2006, 19:05

Exacts winnings tables

If you are addict to statistics, or you want to maximize your earnings ? These tables are for you

correct version:

Exacts winnings tables

If you are an addict to statistics, or you want to maximize your earnings ? These tables are for you
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husky1 - Novice English
Friday 16/06/2006, 19:12

The ELO system (level 20 )

The ELO system is a special mode reserved to players above level 20. It allow for a more strategic gameplay.

Once you reach level 20, to play in ELO, you must have a valid Deck. A valid Deck follow thoses rules :
- No doubles
- The sum of the levels of the characters must no be over 25.

When you begin in ELO, you will start with a value of 1000. Then, after each ELO battle, your value will go up or down based on the result of the battle and the ELO value of your opponent.

ELO is considered as the mode where the best players can show off their true talent.


corrected version:

The ELO system (level 20 )

The ELO system is a special mode reserved for players above level 20. It allows for a more strategic gameplay.

Once you reach level 20, to play in ELO, you must have a valid Deck. A valid Deck follows these rules :
- No doubles
- The sum of the levels of the characters must not be over 25.

When you begin in ELO, you will start with a value of 1000. Then, after each ELO battle, your value will go up or down based on the result of the battle and the ELO value of your opponent.

ELO is considered as the mode where the best players can show off their true talent.
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TnC-Macthorpe - Imperator - Tea English
Friday 16/06/2006, 19:16

Ulu Watu
Gaia - Ms. Niceguy could be Ms. Nicegirl or Nicegal but its not any grammatical or spelling error just personal.
Nanook - 'to venge his kinsfolk' should be 'to avenge his kinsfolk'
Wee Lee - What husky1 said
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husky1 - Novice English
Friday 16/06/2006, 19:19

The Characters's Shop

much better version

The Character Shop

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