The fanscript is a true sequel to my first story (I had some stuff that needs to be answered) so I hope you don't mind. To see the original and the others: http://www.wix.com/yaoihuntressearth/Clint-City-Stories
Panel 1: It’s another night for Roots as Armand, Tshern and Lilly are carrying boxes of canned food to the storage room of the new soup kitchen the clan set up. Caught in a debate, Armand and Tshern are getting fairly close to arguing and annoying Lilly (who is four feet in front of them) as she rolls her eyes.
Tsiern: Come on, the guy’s long dead; he won’t have won anyway.
Armand: Not as a zombie.
Panel 2: Armand just can’t believe the stupidity of Tshern’s belief as he to him while they set the boxes down. The feeling is mutual for Tshern.
Armand: Not like your guy is any better; with all those drugs in his system he couldn’t even land straight punch.
Tsiern: He survived; it just means he can take more hits.
Panel 3: Grating on her last nerve, Lilly lets them have it and makes a bit of a blow. Unknown to them, a monster-shaped shadow looms in the corner as a floating key chain with three keys attached to it jingle above the Roots members heads.
Lilly: Would you be quiet! Nobody but you two care whether Frank Zappa could beat David Crosby in fist-fight.
Panel 4: The shadowy figure’s eye glow red as it looms over Tshern and Armand who innocently find their debate of use.
Tsiern: Well, we think it’s important.
Panel 5: The figure’s white, spiky arms wrap around the two men and lifts them six feet in the air as they struggle to break free. Her back turned against the fiasco as she bends over to set her box down.
Lilly: See what I mean.
Panel 6: Shot of Lilly’s face as a look of pure shock takes over at what she sees.
Lilly: What the...
Panel 1: The monster reveals itself to be XU52 in its final evolution as it launches a few of its “buds” at Lilly (who is shocked and disgusted at the sight of it.) Tshern and Armand (who’s in the process of changing into his werewolf form).
Panel 2: Lilly manages to dodge as the “buds” splatter against the wall behind her.
Panel 3: The instant Armand’s teeth sinks into XU52’s arm, it sends a shock of pain that loosens its hold on him. Getting over her unease, Lilly focuses all her attention on it and draws out a bowie knife.
Panel 4: Shot of Lilly making a mad charge at him.
Panel 5: Just as Armand slips out of XU52’s hold, it throws Tshern right at Lilly who jumps out of the way and launches the knife at it.
Panel 6: That lands smack dab into it just as Armand slashes it as hard as he can.
Panel 7: Alas, the victory is short-lived when XU52 smashes one of its spiky arms into Armand’s face while launching more “buds” at Lilly and Tshern.
Panel 1: The impact sends Armand flying right into a steel food locker. This time both Lilly and Tshern get hit with four “buds” each, latching on to them like an octopus.
Panel 2: Both of them frantically struggle with getting them off, especially Lilly who can’t get over how gross the “buds” are.
Lilly: Get ‘em off. Get ‘em off.
Panel 3: Agitated with the rough treatment, the “buds” on Lilly, deflate themselves spraying out a green, stinging liquid all over her.
Panel 4: Knocked out from the exposure of the liquid, Lilly and Tshern lay on the ground as the “buds” are in the process of crumbling to goo. Along with Armand being knocked unconscious, XU52 slowly makes its way toward the two, lifting its arms to strike.
Panel 5: Like a divine intervention, the keys from before have a glowing light blue aura and float in front of its face, stopping him from doing a killing blow.
Voice: (Off-panel) Keys. Keys, XU52. Keys.
Sound FX: Jingle, jingle.
Panel 6: Dazzled by their seductive sound, XU52 follows the keys as they guide him to the back door.
Voice: (off-panel) Good boy.
Sound FX: Jingle, jingle.
Panel 1: Scene changes to a dark alley behind the soup kitchen as Vryer stands by the open back of a truck, talking on a cell phone. The floating keys fling themselves into back of the truck with XU52 mindlessly following them.
Vryer: I assure you that Sigmund will be most pleased with this new experiment.
Voice: (From phone) Ok.
Panel 2: He replies casually as slams the truck doors shut.
Vryer: Now do be a dear and use to whistle I left you to bring my babies back inside.
Panel 3: Still having bad memories from Sigmund’s birthday party, Dolly looks nervously while standing in field behind the base as she holds up the whistle. Four Gheistlings (2nd level) can be seen doing what looks like playing.
Dolly: Are you sure they won’t attack me?
Panel 4: Before she can get a straight answer, he shuts off the phone.
Dolly: What do you mean maybe?
Sound FX: Click
Panel 5: Putting the phone back into a pocket, he turns to someone with a satisfied smile. All you can see of this stranger is a ghostly, feminine hand dangling that is the same color as the aura around the keys.
Vryer: Ah, there you are.
Ghost: I left the note like you asked.
Vryer: Very good.
Panel 6: He finds the ghost’s hope cute (only the hand can be seen) as he turns to her with an amused look.
Ghost: So am I back in?
Vryer: We’ll see my dear. We’ll see.
Panel 1: Angry at both Vryer and herself, Dolly almost yells as she sits on a chair in Vryer’s lab as Methane helps her get rid of the poison in her system (which is shown by the slime green veins that appear on her body) by administering a shot into her arm. By her on a table are three used syringes.
Dolly: When am I going to learn that “maybe” is never in my favor?
Panel 2: The veins begin to vanish as she rubs her arm, still fuming over the man. Use to Vryer’s crap, Methane calmly replies to her while leaning against another table.
Methane: The sooner you learn that the better.
Dolly: What the Hell is with that guy?
Panel 3: Flashback of Dolly’s grad school days as she helps clean out her dean’s office and comes across an essay that the dean was using to fix the short leg on his desk.
Dolly Caption: I read his dissertations while helping my dean move out of his office and I saw a man who truly wanted to help the world.
Panel 4: Flashback Dolly happily turns her back on the dean, not knowing the fate the will befall her.
Dolly Caption: So I like an idiot I tell the dean where he can shove his sexist comments and spend two months trying to find you guys. And what do I get in return?
Panel 5: Methane picks up a scapel sitting there as Dolly keeps ranting.
Dolly: The chance to be his experiments’ personal punching bag that’s what.
Methane: If it makes you feel any better, he wasn’t always like this.
Panel 6: Not sure if she buys it, she turns to him with a slightly suspicious look. He just lets his fingers play with the scapel, his mind going back to how it all began.
Dolly: So what happened to him?
Methane: He got what he wanted.
Panel 1: Methane takes a drag from his cigarette as the image of Vryer (1st level) standing before Sigmund (2nd level), almost humbly presenting what looks like the early stages of a Gheistling. Sigmund gives his silent approval of it.
Methane: Sigmund gave him the chance and he didn’t let him down.
Panel 2: Flashback-Sigmund presents to Vryer his new lab. Still in his humbler days, Vryer looks at it with amazement.
Methane Caption: And the prestige followed.
Panel 3: Now at the 2nd level evolution, Vryer flashes an arrogant smile as Nina (at his right side) adoringly, in her own subtle way, leans into him as he wraps his right arm around her. To his left, a level 1 Gheistling sits by his feet like a dog as its creator rests his other hand on top of its head.
Methane Caption: And the more prestige he got the more the benefits he got.
Panel 4: Vryer raises his hand dramatically, his ego at its current zenith as he is surrounded by his loyal army of Gheistlings (2nd level) and Levitations.
Methane Caption: And with the benefits, that’s when the ego started to take over.
Panel 5: Methane causally blows out a stream of smoke, ignoring Dolly’s frustration.
Methane: Making him the man we all know and love. And it’s damned him ever since.
Dolly: So it’s all bad-timing on my part?
NOTE: Damn, I forgot to change the part where he was smoking a cig to playing with that scapel for the censored version. So please ignore the cigerette part on the first and fifth panel.
Panel 6: On the let side, Dolly pouts over her state as the background begins to shift into the background on the scene on the right which is of Sentinel’s office as Malia (2nd level) slams open a door, barking out an order.
Dolly Thought: That really helped.
Malia: Alright maggots!
OTHER NOTE: Sorry about the wait, I've had to do some major rewrites of the main plotline. I'm a bit of a perfectionist in that way.
Panel 1: Long panel. With a smile, Malia stands in a doorway blind to the several members (Klaus, Chloe, Havok and Dayton) who were foolish enough to participate in her work-out session (in work-out clothes) stumble out in the pain that only a good dose of major league exercise can give.
Malia: Tomorrow same time?
Panel 2: Making her way to a water cooler, Malia is greeted by Rick as he casually takes a sip from a cup, leaning against his desk (which is next to the cooler) and not all that phased by her. Familiar with guys like him, she smiles slyly. NOTE: Malia is 5’3” and Rick is about ten inches taller.
Rick: So you’re the little slave-driver I’ve heard about.
Malia: I prefer the term, “instructor.”
Panel 3: Malia gets some water from the cooler while Havok practically drags himself back to his desk behind her.
Malia: You should join us next time; you might like it.
Panel 4: He brushes off her enthusiasm as she brushes off any accusations. Behind them, Havok coughs out his own opinion.
Rick: I don’t think I’m ready for a heart-attack.
Malia: Come on, I’m not that bad.
Panel 5: Rick condescendingly pats her on the head a few times, to emphasize his height over hers. This obviously does not sit well with her to the point of getting fairly close to annoying her.
Rick: Ok sweetheart, here’s the deal: if you can subdue me, I’ll agree to whatever crazy diet you can come up with.