A while ago, I had dream about the UR world and thought it would make a good story. After sharing what I had with my guild, they suggested that I should post it on this board so I hope the people in charge don't mind and that they and the rest of you like it. It's a general Sentinel story with GHEIST as the enemy though there is a few scenes that will be a bit darker than the offical comic.
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Panel 1: An establishing shot of Ben’s store during the late afternoon. There’s a poster next to the logo on the front window that says “As Mentioned in Roots’ Battles”. Ben is helping Noodile and Lilly load some of his organic cakes into his teammates’ truck (both girls are standing on the bed). Robin can be seen slumped down on a bench in front of the store with a bottle of Vita-Water in his hand.
Panel 2: This bottom panel takes us to a tavern called “Wenches.” The building is made of cobblestones with a plaque that says “Proudly Exploiting Women (With Their Permission) Since 1986”, and you can see John sitting at a table by the front window, nursing a mug of beer yet too annoyed to fully enjoy it.
yaoihuntresse - Wednesday 18/06/2008, 00:04